re: Can my IELTS essays be checked if I post them here?
As you have now seen, sometimes people have time to check essays and sometimes they don't. I rarely check them because it can take up to 15 minutes to go through a whole essay and make corrections and comments. In that time, I can answer dozens of single questions in Ask A Teacher. In your particular case, I have no idea about IELTS bands because I never taught students in preparation for that exam.
Originally Posted by umnperera
Please see the corrections I made to your post above in red. Remember to capitalise the word "I" at all times.
Note that I have also corrected your thread title.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.