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    4.Is the paragraph cohesive?

    Hi everyone,
    Now I am translating the chinese standard for testing the tempered glass lids into English,but I am not sure whether some of them are correct or conform to ways of thinking of westners.I would apprecicate it if you could help me.
    Qualification standard:For Grade A,the total fractured pieces in every 50MM*50MM square shall be less than 50.Those happen to be in the line of the square shall be regarded as 0.5 pieces and the maximum length of the piece shall be less than 8mm.For grade B,the total fractured pieces in every 50MM*50MM square shall be less than 40. Those happen to be in the line of the square shall be regarded as 0.5 pieces and the maximum length of the piece shall be less than 9mm.For grade C, the total fractured pieces in every 50MM*50MM square shall be less than 30.Those happen to be in the line of the squre shall be regarded as 0.5 pieces and the the maximum length of the piece shall be less than 10mm.

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    Richard
    Last edited by sky753; 26-Mar-2006 at 02:09.

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    Re: 4.Is the paragraph cohesive?

    the total fractured pieces- total number of fractured pieces ...under 50
    Those happen to be in the line of the square shall be regarded as 0.5 pieces- I don't understand this phrase- I can't picture what you mean

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