Re: School Application
I am baffled as to why this application letter is being written in English. It is an application to a Taiwanese university from a Philippino person who has lived and worked in Korea and has studied Chinese. I can see no reason for any part of it to be in English.
Unfortunately, there are so many errors in this letter, I am not prepared to start trying to correct it. It will take too long.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.