dm_s
New member
- Joined
- Feb 4, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Belarus
- Current Location
- Belarus
Hi there! Newbie to this forums here.
I am creating a company profile on LinkedIn on behalf of the entity I work for, but, not being a native speaker, I have some doubts regarding the wording. Guess it looks a bit... crumpled? (You may call it rusky, okay). So what I am asking for is a piece of advise on how to improve it without affecting semantics etc, just changing itso that it looked more genuine for the English-speaking visitor of the page.
Any volunteers? I'll PM my "beta" of the text to those who would be willing to help.
Thanks
I am creating a company profile on LinkedIn on behalf of the entity I work for, but, not being a native speaker, I have some doubts regarding the wording. Guess it looks a bit... crumpled? (You may call it rusky, okay). So what I am asking for is a piece of advise on how to improve it without affecting semantics etc, just changing itso that it looked more genuine for the English-speaking visitor of the page.
Any volunteers? I'll PM my "beta" of the text to those who would be willing to help.
Thanks