plz check my application i want to send for my daughter admission re-test.
St. Patrick’s Girls High School
Sub: Request for Admission Re-test.
My daughter Sara Nadeem born at 29 /08/2008 has appeared in the admission test of
St. Patrick’s High school with the Receipt No. 000, but unable to get succeeded in final list.
She is a brilliant and confident student bearing a very well-mannered attitude.
Here I request you to kindly consider her for RE- TEST for Admission in your school.
We have great respect for the school's reputation, and we think highly of the school's facilities. We trust your school can provide good environment for her study here to equip herself for her future challenges.
Thank you for CONSIDERING OUR APPLICATION, and we look forward to your positive reply.
Why have you capitalised "retest" and "considering our application"?
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