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    Default Application requesting for Admission re-test

    plz check my application i want to send for my daughter admission re-test.



    To,
    The Sister,
    St. Patrick’s Girls High School
    Karachi.
    Sub: Request for Admission Re-test.

    Dear Madam,
    My daughter Sara Nadeem born at 29 /08/2008 has appeared in the admission test of
    St. Patrick’s High school with the Receipt No. 000, but unable to get succeeded in final list.
    She is a brilliant and confident student bearing a very well-mannered attitude.
    Here I request you to kindly consider her for RE- TEST for Admission in your school.
    We have great respect for the school's reputation, and we think highly of the school's facilities. We trust your school can provide good environment for her study here to equip herself for her future challenges.
    Thank you for CONSIDERING OUR APPLICATION, and we look forward to your positive reply.



    Yours sincerely,



    Fozia Nadeem.

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    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
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    Default Re: Application requesting for Admission re-test

    Why have you capitalised "retest" and "considering our application"?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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