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Right now, I'm deciding if I should join Jack(who's also a fellow I met on lonelyplanet)in Thailand and Malaysia sometime in early May.
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Right now, I'm deciding if I should join Jack, who's also a fellow I met on lonelyplanet, in Thailand and Malaysia sometime in early May.
I want to use the commas, but it would make it sound like I met him on a lonelyplanet in Thailand, when lonelyplanet is a website for travelers. That's why I changed the commas into brackets.
Are both sentences okay?
VS
Right now, I'm deciding if I should join Jack, who's also a fellow I met on lonelyplanet, in Thailand and Malaysia sometime in early May.
I want to use the commas, but it would make it sound like I met him on a lonelyplanet in Thailand, when lonelyplanet is a website for travelers. That's why I changed the commas into brackets.
Are both sentences okay?