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Boris Tatarenko

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Do my sentences sound good?

1) His faltering deeds drive me crazy.
2) I'm so tired. I feel my legs faltering.
3) A speaker provided several faltering arguments. It seemed like he had no idea what he was talking about.

I tried to show three different meaning of the word.
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Only #2 sounds anything like natural to me.
 

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I don't even care for #2.
 

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I'm not keen on any of them. The main use is in things like "He took several faltering steps towards the building".
 

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My horse came out of the gate in first place, but he faltered in the home stretch.
 

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A good example of "faltered" but the thread title and all the examples were for "faltering".
 

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Then just change the tense -- he was faltering in the home stretch.
 

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I don't have problem with any of those sentences in the right context.
An argument can certainly falter. Deeds can falter - though you'd need to know more about him to know what his 'faltering deeds' were.
I can only think that the objections are on stylistic grounds.
 

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The first one sounds odd to me because it is mixing registers- I think that a person who talks of someone's faltering deeds wouldn't pair it up with something like drive me crazy.
 
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