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    Would somebody please comment on my English?

    Pharmaceutical companies spent huge amount of money for advertisement in medical journals. The budget for journal advertising has increasing tremendously. In the United States, it has been reported that in the 1980 more than 170 million were spent and the amount more than doubled in 1991.

    Regardless of amount of money spent, there are a few studies done to assess the compliance of the advertisement with the code of conduct produces by X and there is no study done in Y to evaluate the compliance of the advertisement with the R concept.

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    Dean

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    Pharmaceutical companies spend huge amounts of money on advertisements
    170 million dollars
    of the amount
    produced by X

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    Thanks Tdol,

    I really appreciate your help.

    Regards,

    Dean

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    You're welcome, Dean.

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