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    hi

    Once upon a time, there was a mouse which was very hungry. The mouse went to the kitchen and stole some food to eat. Suddenly, a cat came out. The cat wanted to fight out the little mouse but the mouse was very agile to escape from the cat. However, the mouse had got nothing to eat because the cat was always around the food. Finally the mouse died. What a poor mouse!

    Is there anyone who can help me correct the above story? Please tell if there's any mistake.

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    Re: hi

    to fight out- to fight
    was very agile to escape- was very agile and managed to escape

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