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    MY WRITING SKILL IS NOT TOO MUCH PROFESSIONAL AS YOU.PERHAPS I NEED TO SUBMIT A PROJECT REPORT.CAN ANY ONE HELP ME FOR EDITING MY REPORT.I SEND ITS FIRST PARA ALONG WITHIS POST JUST IN BELOW.
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    Product quality of a system or a process unit depends on many factors. Among these factors, system safety and reliability evaluations are the main key parameter to ensure system design, development and operation. Fault tree analysis (FTA) is a systematic approach to estimate system safety and reliability qualitatively as well as quantitatively. FTA has been extensively used in process facilities to identify and assess system hazard. Qualitative analysis evaluates a fault tree in terms of its minimal cutsets, common mode failure and importance components leading to an unwanted situation. Whereas quantitative analysis of a fault tree help to estimates the probability of a eventual event from the given failure probabilities of a systems components and basic causes.
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    main key parameter- main & key ean more or less the same, so delete one ad use the plural
    common mode failure- singular or plural?

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    Thanks for ur sugesstions.Can u rearange the folowing sentence structure for me??I amnot feel good with these sturucture.
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    Fault tree analysis (FTA) is a systematic approach to estimate system safety and reliability qualitatively as well as quantitatively. For these reasons,FTA has been extensively used in process facilities to identify and assess system hazard.
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    It sounds OK to me.

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    Can any one check the line for me?I m afraid iff there is any gramatical or structural mistakes on the sentence.
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    These two steps are very important for analyzing a fault tree with greater accuracy in least time.
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    To make use of a suitable fault tree modularization algorithm to module a large and complex fault tree for determining exact number of cutsets of a tree with least time.
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    in least time- the shortest time
    2- This isn't a complete sentence because there's no mian verb. If it's a sub-heading or something, then it would be fine

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