wangliccsi
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Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly . ( 5 stentence, thank you for advance.
1. “ Thanking you for past favours,I remain"
2 " we cant fill your older and are therefore caneling it. sorry "
3 "you are prohibited from smoking in the storeroom"
4 "you should not have deducted the 5 persent discount"
5"The contract appended herewith should be executed in triplicate "
PS. To correct them for easy understanding ,but cant not have any grammatic mistake .
PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today . :-(
1. “ Thanking you for past favours,I remain"
2 " we cant fill your older and are therefore caneling it. sorry "
3 "you are prohibited from smoking in the storeroom"
4 "you should not have deducted the 5 persent discount"
5"The contract appended herewith should be executed in triplicate "
PS. To correct them for easy understanding ,but cant not have any grammatic mistake .
PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today . :-(