Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

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wangliccsi

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Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly . ( 5 stentence, thank you for advance.



1. “ Thanking you for past favours,I remain"
2 " we cant fill your older and are therefore caneling it. sorry "
3 "you are prohibited from smoking in the storeroom"
4 "you should not have deducted the 5 persent discount"
5"The contract appended herewith should be executed in triplicate "


PS. To correct them for easy understanding ,but cant not have any grammatic mistake .
PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today . :-(
 

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Sorry, but we do not help with homework. Your teacher needs to know what you can do, not what we can do.
 

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sorry , its not really homework . i am an adult , i need to have this answers for next time adult exam . but i dont have any teacher((((((((((so please help me !
i am not an english local people . so hard for me to do these !
 

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That is not consistent with your original statement: PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today .

Which statement should I believe? To whom did you need to send the homework?
 

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That is not consistent with your original statement: PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today .

Which statement should I believe? To whom did you need to send the homework?



well, i bought a book named "business writing skills". there are some assignments in it . i need to know the answer. but the book has not answers.
i ask for help . so that i can unsderstand the assignment . i have my own answers already . but dont know right or wrong .

i really need your professional help ///
 

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We will not do your work for you. I will give you some advice, however. Pay attention to correct capitalisation and do not leave a space before punctuation marks..
 
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