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    Default fax - reception of Hotel Plaza

    Could you correct the mistakes in the following text, please?
    You can also advise some better phrases, as I don't really send faxes to guests of "my" hotel


    I am supposed to be a receptionist and answer a fax from one of our potential guests, Janet Cooper...


    From: Hotel Plaza
    To: Janet Cooper
    Page 1 of 1
    Date: 8th June
    To fax no: 01923 285446
    From fax no: 003465271502

    Message:
    Im replying to your fax from the 7th June about your enquiries on our hotel.
    Firstly, Id like to thank you for your questions. I can ensure you that were going to go to any lenghts to satisfy you.
    Hotel Plaza has rooms available for the days you required. I am pleased to tell you that we can offer you all the rooms you want a double room with a balcon for you and your husband; and a twin room for your two teenage daughters.
    All the rooms in our hotel have an en-suite bathroom, to comfort our guests, and a sea view.
    The rooms are 21,000 pesetas per room per night.
    I look forward to welcoming you and your family to our hotel.

    Yours sincelery,

    Reception

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    Default Re: fax - reception of Hotel Plaza

    from the 7th June about your enquiries on- of the 7th enquiring about
    were going to go- will
    lenghts- spelling
    you required- tense
    all the rooms- both
    balcon- spelling
    to comfort our guests- for the comfort of our guests
    Yours sincelery- spelling

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    Default Re: fax - reception of Hotel Plaza

    Oh, thank you, tdol!
    I see I made too many spelling mistakes.... :(

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    Default Re: fax - reception of Hotel Plaza

    Call them typos- it sounds better.

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