[Grammar] grammatical point

[sunfowers]

Hi,
Could you please help he which sentence is correct?
If you find any mistake in this text, please correct it .Please, if you find any mistakes in my essay, can you correct them.

Regards

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Hi,

Could you please tell me which sentence is correct?

If you find any mistakes in this text, please correct them.

If you find any mistakes in my essay, would you please correct them?

Thanks.