Is this an idiom?

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Arteberlina

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Hallo teacher,

I read a sentence in which I feel a verb is missing, but I could be mistaken, in case it is an idiom. The sentence goes like this:

"If art making is going through this adventurous and tortuous path, imagine what the kind of water in which painting is currently navigating."

Can you verify?

Thank you very much.
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"...what kind of water painting is ..."

The entire sentence is rather clunky.
 

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I agree but what you offer is clearly not what is meant...
 

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If you know what is meant, why are you asking for help here?
 

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My main problem with the sentence is that it is attempting to create a contrast between "art making" and "painting". Isn't painting a type of art?
 

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Hmmm, interesting ... I will think about this.
 

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Also, we usually refer to things navigating "waters​".
 

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It would read better to me if it said imagine the waters which painting is currently navigating. It's not an idiom, but the sentence is a bit of a mess.
 
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