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  1. #1
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    Please correct this

    I am a newbie here and not sure whether or not such posting are allowed here.
    I have the following technical write-up and I would like this to be
    corrected. Can some one please correct this ?
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    Member system is the heart of the ABC business, which is the group
    of many applications, called ASI's (Application system interfaces)
    such as ADMIN, PAYROLL, COST, SECURITY, HR AND CONTRACTS. This
    system is also key-in payroll information to down stream
    applications such as Mastercare and utility systems. Member system
    applications can be accessed either through GUI screens, developed
    in VB.NET or through green screens developed in COBOL and CICS. Both
    the applications share the common database, DB2. This system has
    over 200 user interface screens, 100 batch Jobs and 1000 DB2 tables.
    There will be 4 releases for a year under this system and the
    quality of all the business solutions that require changes to member
    system will be taken care by a team 10 quality analysts. Following
    are the projects in which I have an active participation as a
    project lead.
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    Thank you,
    Dhruva.

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    Re: Please correct this

    Thank you Jessy, It helps.. and looking forward..

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    Re: Please correct this

    Thank you Jessy for your suggestion. In fact, this is targetted to the recruiters. The intention is to describe the system that we are maintaining.


    Thanks again for your suggestions.

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