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[Ashiuhto]

Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

We didn’t know that disposable chopsticks can be dangerous to health until we took the science class. After all, most of us spend a sizable part of the day away from home, so it’s inevitable that we eat out, as well. It’s hard to distinguish the harmful chopsticks just by appearance. But people had better not choose the ones that look too white and perfectly smooth.

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

We didn't know that disposable chopsticks could be dangerous to health....
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Say:

But people had better not choose the ones that look too white and are perfectly smooth.
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[emsr2d2]

Ashiuhto, I told you in another thread that because this piece about chopsticks is for a competition at school, I consider it to be cheating if you get us to rewrite your entire piece. Please don't post any more of it. You must work on it on your own.

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