Rostislav Kravtsiv
New member
- Joined
- Sep 12, 2014
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Ukraine
- Current Location
- Germany
Hi! I am an indie game developer and now making a short video for key game's features.
Could you please take a look and say if the text I wrote sounds "natural"?
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Your land was stolen, plundered and poisoned. Criminal gangs rob, rape and kill those who survived.
A bloody tyrant wants to create a new empire of obedient sheeple...but there are some people who will never be enslaved.
Get the weapon you are most fit for, from bats and hammers to flamethrowers and bombs.
Find comrades-in-arms, and go through cruel fights, through swamps, deserts and dead settlements.
Explore the island to find out the truth and punish those who plundered your land.
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Could you please take a look and say if the text I wrote sounds "natural"?
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Your land was stolen, plundered and poisoned. Criminal gangs rob, rape and kill those who survived.
A bloody tyrant wants to create a new empire of obedient sheeple...but there are some people who will never be enslaved.
Get the weapon you are most fit for, from bats and hammers to flamethrowers and bombs.
Find comrades-in-arms, and go through cruel fights, through swamps, deserts and dead settlements.
Explore the island to find out the truth and punish those who plundered your land.
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