ray0112
New member
- Joined
- Sep 21, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- United States
I need proofreading on my cover letter! I did my best, but I'm not sure whether it has grammatical errors. I would very appreciate it if you give me some feedback on it. Here's my cover letter.
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I am currently in my second year of a Master’s degree in accountancy at somewhere University and I would like to be considered for the position of Tax Intern.
I have been fascinated with taxes since I volunteered in VITA program, as a tax preparer. I very enjoyed helping people to file their tax return, educate them on tax credits and options, and get them the best amounts for their individual situations. I discovered that tax was a good match for me because every return was a puzzle with no easy answer and I loved solving the puzzles. Due to my genuine interest in tax, I was an outstanding student in my Tax Treatment of Individuals class at somewhere university.
The biggest reason *** is my dream workplace is that it is where I can have great development opportunities. **** attracts me because of the emphasis on early responsibility together with all necessary support. At ***, I believe I would be able to work with many talented tax professionals who would inspire me to work even harder as an intern, and it will prepare me to be a successful professional in tax accounting field.
I would enjoy the challenge and the learning opportunity provided by the Tax Intern position. In closing, I am excited about the possibility of participating in the Korean Practice, and would love to meet with you to discuss the value that I can bring to your company. I appreciate your time and consideration.
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I am currently in my second year of a Master’s degree in accountancy at somewhere University and I would like to be considered for the position of Tax Intern.
I have been fascinated with taxes since I volunteered in VITA program, as a tax preparer. I very enjoyed helping people to file their tax return, educate them on tax credits and options, and get them the best amounts for their individual situations. I discovered that tax was a good match for me because every return was a puzzle with no easy answer and I loved solving the puzzles. Due to my genuine interest in tax, I was an outstanding student in my Tax Treatment of Individuals class at somewhere university.
The biggest reason *** is my dream workplace is that it is where I can have great development opportunities. **** attracts me because of the emphasis on early responsibility together with all necessary support. At ***, I believe I would be able to work with many talented tax professionals who would inspire me to work even harder as an intern, and it will prepare me to be a successful professional in tax accounting field.
I would enjoy the challenge and the learning opportunity provided by the Tax Intern position. In closing, I am excited about the possibility of participating in the Korean Practice, and would love to meet with you to discuss the value that I can bring to your company. I appreciate your time and consideration.
