juniorgeologist
Member
- Joined
- Oct 2, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- Canada
Hi! Anybody could help me with this? I do fix it a lot but it still sounds a little wired when I read it...:-D:-D
Please help me to make it sounds more natural.
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The AAA has no doubt served as a landmark for geologists in China. However, it is really fortunate that your CEO, Mr. LLLL, mentioned me about the opportunity to be a junior geologist in AAA Canada after I get my master degree in University of BBBB.
In November, I will graduate from the University of BBBB with a Master of Science degree in CCCC. Throughout my university career, I have gained combined knowledge on geology, geophysics and petroleum engineering from my master courses, including Hydrocarbon Reservoir Analysis, Structure, Basin Analysis, Seismic Interpretation, Well Logging, Ichnology, and Petroleum Production etc. Strong professional skills are also developed during several projects, and some of them are well expressed using multiple way including posters and presentations.
My parents are geologists in DDDDDD Oilfield where I grew up, thus the totally comprehension of how important the sustainable development is for the oilfield makes me interested in unconventional reservoirs. I adapt well to changing environments – I was the volunteer helped to mark the geological presentations in the international conference in Canada, I was the team leader trusted by my international friends in the university, and all these happened in the first year I came to Canada. I also like to try new effective method. For one of my assignments, I used AI to draw the core log instead of pencil. It costs me a little more time, but a true scale core log in higher resolution was finished on time. The symbol patterns I built will also help me to finish a similar work rapidly in the future.
I am confident my education background and relative experiences will add further value and success to AAA.
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Please help me to make it sounds more natural.
Start
The AAA has no doubt served as a landmark for geologists in China. However, it is really fortunate that your CEO, Mr. LLLL, mentioned me about the opportunity to be a junior geologist in AAA Canada after I get my master degree in University of BBBB.
In November, I will graduate from the University of BBBB with a Master of Science degree in CCCC. Throughout my university career, I have gained combined knowledge on geology, geophysics and petroleum engineering from my master courses, including Hydrocarbon Reservoir Analysis, Structure, Basin Analysis, Seismic Interpretation, Well Logging, Ichnology, and Petroleum Production etc. Strong professional skills are also developed during several projects, and some of them are well expressed using multiple way including posters and presentations.
My parents are geologists in DDDDDD Oilfield where I grew up, thus the totally comprehension of how important the sustainable development is for the oilfield makes me interested in unconventional reservoirs. I adapt well to changing environments – I was the volunteer helped to mark the geological presentations in the international conference in Canada, I was the team leader trusted by my international friends in the university, and all these happened in the first year I came to Canada. I also like to try new effective method. For one of my assignments, I used AI to draw the core log instead of pencil. It costs me a little more time, but a true scale core log in higher resolution was finished on time. The symbol patterns I built will also help me to finish a similar work rapidly in the future.
I am confident my education background and relative experiences will add further value and success to AAA.
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