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    Default Paragraph check

    could some one check this paragraph and give me opinions.


    YEARBOOK:
    The vertiginous evolution of technologies is provoking that month to month there are constant changes made in the services that communications companies offer; just like a continues change in their business models. Mergers, technological advances and new market strategies have been constant within the last year. That is why the company presents their Cell and Broadband yearbook, where you could find, not only the latest innovations of the sector, but also how the main players of those markets foresee the future.

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    Daniel

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    is provoking that month to month there are constant changes- (sounds a bit like a translation to me) is causing changes from month to month
    continues- continuous
    you could find- can

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    Tdol thank you very much

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