[Essay] Dark Fairy Tale (Please correct my mistakes)

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Dark Fairy Tale.

Once upon a time ago, in land far, far away in the middle of the woods stood a big castle forgotten by anyone. It seemed that nobody lived there, but when the sky came dark, people who living in the village nearby that wood could hear some strange noises during the night, but no one cared about it. There was happiness in village, until the children started missing. It was sunny day when the first child had left his house forever. All villagers were filled with hope, especially family that their children will came back, but days went by and there was no sign from missing children. One day a group of men decided to go to the wood, because they heard a legend about the mysterious strangers of the forest which have been handed on from generation to generation. They took some tools, holy water and cross just for case and left the village. The wood was so beautiful and peaceful, but they could feel the darkness aura surrounding them. After two hours they were finding a big castle which they heard from local stories. The door was closed, but they knew there was something wrong with this place. After that, they saw some small footprints and blood when they were looking around the castle and realized that probably it’s belong to their missing children. The general sequence of events gave them no grounds for optimism. They imagined that their children were dying in cruel agony, alone, far away from home. The first thing they thought were vampires or another bloodsucking beasts who only attacked at night. Having no guarantee what they will meet in the middle of a mysterious building, without hesitation, ready to fight they sank into castle’s darkness and they gone forever. They journey was not the end. After that, families in the village lost their loved children and husbands and lived in deep sadness and misery ever after, in that place of the mysterious deaths of people.





Thank you in advance for your correction! ;-)

 

[tedmc]

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