[General] Letter Of Motivation

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farnaz.g

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Hey Guys please read my letter of motivation and let me know if there is anything less! and you're most welcome to correct it :-D
LETTER OF MOTIVATION

Science has always interested me and chemistry in my opinion the most important of the sciences today. As a science of matter and its properties, chemistry can be applied to almost any situation from forensics through medicine to environmental sustainability in particular my favorite subject I know and would like to take it further hopefully as a career, molecular mechanisms and what they can tell us about our world fascinate me, with this letter I would hereby wish to apply for the position of a bachelors degree in ICT (Institute Of Chemical Engineering)
I really enjoy learning theoretical concepts and applying them to problems this is my common interest between chemistry and studying Mathematics at A-level.

What I love about chemistry is the constant sense of discovery, looking at simple reactions and molecular level is like a glimpse of a whole new world to me, studying the theoretical concepts and also having the opportunity to apply them practically is what interests me.
I consider myself as a highly organized, strong willed and motivated individual with a desire to learn more about chemistry and the chemical reactions.
I believe that my academic ability and handwork and dedication make me an ideal student to study chemical engineering at this university.

I look forward to taking advantage of all the opportunities that will be open to me as a student both in work and leisure time.
 

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There are lots of things that are less than your letter. What do you mean to ask?
As a science of matter and its properties, chemistry can be applied to almost any situation from forensics through medicine to environmental sustainability in particular my favorite subject I know and would like to take it further hopefully as a career, molecular mechanisms and what they can tell us about our world fascinate me, with this letter I would hereby wish to apply for the position of a bachelors degree in ICT (Institute Of Chemical Engineering)
I really enjoy learning theoretical concepts and applying them to problems this is my common interest between chemistry and studying Mathematics at A-level.

This is a tremendous run-on sentence. Try to use some punctuation and separate your thoughts into sentences.
 
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