bennyipfar
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I am practicing my writing skills preparing for the upcoming TOEFL exam, and hope someone can give me advises to further improve my writing skills.
The reading states that AIDS advocacy group (AAGs), tries to help AIDS’s patients more easily to obtain medicines, provides three methods of supports. However, the lecture refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading claims that major drug company should lower the price of AIDS drug. In contrary to this point, the lecture argues that such method may hinder investors pour money into company to produce any new medicines.
Second, the reading suggests that getting government engagement into buying AIDS medicines at a large quantity can benefit both patients and major drug company. Nevertheless, the lecture claims that because most poor countries rely heavily on material import, governments do not have enough money to pay for the drugs.
Third, the reading encourages manufacturing AIDS drug inside poor countries might lower the cost of the drug, and it believes this method can reduce the costs of making new drug. However, the lecture discredits this method and says such method will produce tinted drug that endanger AIDS patients.
The reading states that AIDS advocacy group (AAGs), tries to help AIDS’s patients more easily to obtain medicines, provides three methods of supports. However, the lecture refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading claims that major drug company should lower the price of AIDS drug. In contrary to this point, the lecture argues that such method may hinder investors pour money into company to produce any new medicines.
Second, the reading suggests that getting government engagement into buying AIDS medicines at a large quantity can benefit both patients and major drug company. Nevertheless, the lecture claims that because most poor countries rely heavily on material import, governments do not have enough money to pay for the drugs.
Third, the reading encourages manufacturing AIDS drug inside poor countries might lower the cost of the drug, and it believes this method can reduce the costs of making new drug. However, the lecture discredits this method and says such method will produce tinted drug that endanger AIDS patients.
