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    Dear all,
    Would somebody please help me with my sentences?

    In order to evaluate if any improvement take place in the pharmaceutical advertisement a year following the first survey, M performed a similar survey in 1987 to the advertisements in a same number of medical journals. With more advertisements evaluated in this study by the same reviewers, they found out that the same problem occurred and was reduced by the code of conduct. The methodology of this study was not well described.

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    Dean



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    evaluate if- I'd use whether
    take place- takes, but I think had taken would be better
    a same- the
    and was reduced- ashouldn't this be 'but'?

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    Thanks Tdol ,

    Dean

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