Vincen't Wong
Junior Member
- Joined
- Feb 23, 2015
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Afrikaans
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
showing my immature writing again
topic:
In your housing estate, a gang of criminals has been tricking old people into giving them money. On behalf of the Owners' Association of the estate, write to the Post about an incident that took place recently. Describe how the old person was tricked, what the victim lost, and explain some of the measures your association has taken to protect people from being tricked in future.
Dear editor,
I am writing on behalf of the Owners’ Association of the estate of ABC estate to express my concern on recent criminal incidents. In ABC estate, many old people were tricking by a gang of criminals, and they thus lost money, I would like to describe a serious incident that took place last week and provide some suggestion to stop the tricks happen in the future.
First of all, that an old woman called Sam was being tricked is one of the serious and remarkable crimes recently. Last month, Sam met a young lady called Mary when she was shopping. They became best friends very soon. Mary claimed that she was a diviner and could help Sam to divine people’ future. Sam was so excited, and she asked for Mary to check her son’s future. Unfortunately, Mary told her that her son would be dead in the nearly future because it is his fate. Sam was crying so hard as she really loved her son. At this moment, Mary said that she could help Sam but she needed money to prepare for an altar which could help her son to avoid the disaster. Therefore, Sam gave her all the saving in her banks immediately. After that, the young lady disappeared, and no one could find her despite the fact that Sam’s son had called the police.
In this case, Sam lost 4 million dollars and much jewelry. However, the case is just one of the all in our estate. I am of the view that the Government, citizens and mass media should do something to prevent the tragedy happening again.
To begin with, government should increase the penalty of criminals who tricked others. Our current penalty is not tough enough to deter criminals from doing bad things. If they get caught, they just need to pay little penalty to government and do some trivial community service. Many greedy criminals will therefore want to take the risk to trick ignorant and innocent old people like Sam. With higher penalty, many criminals will be afraid of the law and the consequence so they would not dare to trick others anymore. In addition, government can also set up a task force and increase manpower to catch these criminals, I am sure that the plans could increase criminal cases detection rate and reduce crime rate in our estate.
Besides, old people should be aware of criminals, mass media should publish and report all the tricks happen in our city such as by TV shows, radio, Internet and newspapers. Therefore, more and more people can be aware of the danger of those criminals, and they will learn the experience from those unfortunate cases through mass media. It is really helpful to diminish the likelihood of them to be tricked.
For citizens and residents, they should report any suspicious tricks to police and take care of old people to avoid them to be tricked by criminals. Our joint effort is necessary to reduce crime rate in the estate and alleviate police’s pressure of many cases.
Finally, I hope that Sam’s incident would not happen again. I believe that the Government, media and citizens could accept my above mentioned to solve the problem for old people and our estate.
Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
topic:
In your housing estate, a gang of criminals has been tricking old people into giving them money. On behalf of the Owners' Association of the estate, write to the Post about an incident that took place recently. Describe how the old person was tricked, what the victim lost, and explain some of the measures your association has taken to protect people from being tricked in future.
Dear editor,
I am writing on behalf of the Owners’ Association of the estate of ABC estate to express my concern on recent criminal incidents. In ABC estate, many old people were tricking by a gang of criminals, and they thus lost money, I would like to describe a serious incident that took place last week and provide some suggestion to stop the tricks happen in the future.
First of all, that an old woman called Sam was being tricked is one of the serious and remarkable crimes recently. Last month, Sam met a young lady called Mary when she was shopping. They became best friends very soon. Mary claimed that she was a diviner and could help Sam to divine people’ future. Sam was so excited, and she asked for Mary to check her son’s future. Unfortunately, Mary told her that her son would be dead in the nearly future because it is his fate. Sam was crying so hard as she really loved her son. At this moment, Mary said that she could help Sam but she needed money to prepare for an altar which could help her son to avoid the disaster. Therefore, Sam gave her all the saving in her banks immediately. After that, the young lady disappeared, and no one could find her despite the fact that Sam’s son had called the police.
In this case, Sam lost 4 million dollars and much jewelry. However, the case is just one of the all in our estate. I am of the view that the Government, citizens and mass media should do something to prevent the tragedy happening again.
To begin with, government should increase the penalty of criminals who tricked others. Our current penalty is not tough enough to deter criminals from doing bad things. If they get caught, they just need to pay little penalty to government and do some trivial community service. Many greedy criminals will therefore want to take the risk to trick ignorant and innocent old people like Sam. With higher penalty, many criminals will be afraid of the law and the consequence so they would not dare to trick others anymore. In addition, government can also set up a task force and increase manpower to catch these criminals, I am sure that the plans could increase criminal cases detection rate and reduce crime rate in our estate.
Besides, old people should be aware of criminals, mass media should publish and report all the tricks happen in our city such as by TV shows, radio, Internet and newspapers. Therefore, more and more people can be aware of the danger of those criminals, and they will learn the experience from those unfortunate cases through mass media. It is really helpful to diminish the likelihood of them to be tricked.
For citizens and residents, they should report any suspicious tricks to police and take care of old people to avoid them to be tricked by criminals. Our joint effort is necessary to reduce crime rate in the estate and alleviate police’s pressure of many cases.
Finally, I hope that Sam’s incident would not happen again. I believe that the Government, media and citizens could accept my above mentioned to solve the problem for old people and our estate.
Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong