rosenior
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Hello everybody. It's my first post, but I've been visiting this forum for a long time (thanks to Google).
I am making an electronic product and I wanted to include a certificate in the box. The certificate includes product serial number and its aim is to assure user that this product is of highest quality. This is what I have written:
CERTIFICATE
This is to certify that this original product by [BRAND_NAME] was designed, built and tested with the utmost care in order to ascertain highest level of user satisfaction.
Thorough quality control revealed no defects in any visual or functional aspects of the product.
That's it, just 2 sentences. But because it is so short, I wouldn't want it to have any kind of grammar mistake in it, especially because it is so formal
If you could give me your opinion on it, it would be great.
Thank you in advance.
Ros
I am making an electronic product and I wanted to include a certificate in the box. The certificate includes product serial number and its aim is to assure user that this product is of highest quality. This is what I have written:
CERTIFICATE
This is to certify that this original product by [BRAND_NAME] was designed, built and tested with the utmost care in order to ascertain highest level of user satisfaction.
Thorough quality control revealed no defects in any visual or functional aspects of the product.
That's it, just 2 sentences. But because it is so short, I wouldn't want it to have any kind of grammar mistake in it, especially because it is so formal
If you could give me your opinion on it, it would be great.
Thank you in advance.
Ros