Place your commas after George and mayor. (You don't need as there.)1. My brother George who was elected as mayor has many plans for improving our city.
Say:4. Our hometown team defeated only once went on to the championship.
- Our hometown team, which had been defeated only once, went on to the championship.
Place your commas after Anderson and college.5. John Anderson whom you chose as your roomate in college is a good student.
Sentences 1 and 2 are periodic sentences.Which one is a periodic and/or loose sentence?
1. When all the votes were counted, we saw that John Smith had won.
2. Having finished my term paper, I turned it in to the professor.
3. You may go whenever you wish.