htkndc
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teacher give me subject that '' in about 140 words, write a paragraph about the kind of job you would like to do after you finish your education''
and this is my paragraph
many people often ask me that:'' what would you like to do after you finish your education''. I immediately rely them:'' i want to be a bussiness man''. The requires for that are ability to communicate well, speaking indefinitely in front of the crowd, a bit of creation, etc... .But the most important is you must master on or some languages. I would like to do bussiness because it will bring about me so much benefit. firstly, i can improve my english skills enven learn other languages.secondly, i will contat with many people and acquire the knowledge from many different culturals and lastly i can have opportunity to go aboard for leaning not only qualification but life skills as well.In conclusion, for those reasons and benefits, i hope to be a good bussiness man on one day.
i'm a newbie.please point out the mistakes and help me to fix them. i am going to take an english exam but my english so bad. i hope through this forum i can improve my english. thank you very much. i'm from vietnam, nice to meet you.
and this is my paragraph
many people often ask me that:'' what would you like to do after you finish your education''. I immediately rely them:'' i want to be a bussiness man''. The requires for that are ability to communicate well, speaking indefinitely in front of the crowd, a bit of creation, etc... .But the most important is you must master on or some languages. I would like to do bussiness because it will bring about me so much benefit. firstly, i can improve my english skills enven learn other languages.secondly, i will contat with many people and acquire the knowledge from many different culturals and lastly i can have opportunity to go aboard for leaning not only qualification but life skills as well.In conclusion, for those reasons and benefits, i hope to be a good bussiness man on one day.
i'm a newbie.please point out the mistakes and help me to fix them. i am going to take an english exam but my english so bad. i hope through this forum i can improve my english. thank you very much. i'm from vietnam, nice to meet you.
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