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    Default Sorry for wanting help again, teachers! Please advise...:'(

    Sentence A:
    When I was a little girl, I already loved painting and drawing, so I made up my mind to be a fashion designer in the future.


    Sentence B:
    Until now, I still remember an old song my mother had always sung to me when I was small.


    Please help correct them if there's any mistakes. Thanks again! T_T

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    Default Re: Sorry for wanting help again, teachers! Please advise...

    Quote Originally Posted by Helped Wanted
    Sentence A:
    When I was a little girl, I already loved painting and drawing, so I made up my mind to be a fashion designer in the future.
    This one is almost perfect, except that I would suggest the following small changes (note that I removed the word already):

    When I was a little girl, I loved painting and drawing, so I made up my mind to become a fashion designer in the future.

    Quote Originally Posted by Helped Wanted
    Sentence B:
    Until now, I still remember an old song my mother had always sung to me when I was small.
    This one is also almost correct, except that I don't think you need the words "Until now,".

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    Good job, Red!

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    Thanks for advising again, my teachers! ^o^

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