[Grammar] kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

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dealing with internal and external people of all management levels - what do you mean by that?

to open up the long term service agreement to [STRIKE]negotiation[/STRIKE]
negotiate with

I [STRIKE]am [/STRIKE]
was
born in

May I know what thermal and offshore wind business is ?

not a teacher
 

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Hi tedmc,

Thank you for your feedback.

With internal and external people I mean colleagues and counterparties. Perhaps this is a typical example of interference from my native language.
 

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How about: Whilst dealing with colleagues, clients and counterparts of all management levels on a variety of projects...?

You have not answered my question on thermal and offshore wind business. Are they to do with energy sources?
 

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How about: Whilst dealing with colleagues, clients and counterparts of all management levels on a variety of projects...?

You have not answered my question on thermal and offshore wind business. Are they to do with energy sources?[/QUOTE]

Yes :)

Thank you for your suggestion!
 
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