[Essay] Can anybody edit my essay?

[ivyshi123]

Hi everyone, I have to write a personal statement for my application and I really need someone to read my essay, especially my grammar, I am stressed. I finished but I don't know if its better to post here or email to people who like to read my essay. Thank you !!!:-o:-o:-o:-o:-o:-o:-o:-o

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Hi, everyone, I have to write a personal statement for my school or job application, and I really need someone to review my essay, especially my grammar. I am stressed. I finished, but I don't know if it's better to post here or email to people who would like to read my essay. Thank you!

It's better to post it here.