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    I hope my future life will turn out as it is envisaged. Hence, I will work hard for a bright future ahead.

    Does the sentence above make itself clear? Please help correct it if there's any mistakes...Thanks again, teachers!

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    I think you should simplify that. Perhaps:
    • I hope things will turn out the way I hope.

    Perhaps you could add:
    • I will work hard and hope for a bright future.


    What do you think?

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    Thanks for simplifying the sentence, teacher Ronbee! ^o^

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    You're welcome. :D

    More possibilities:
    • I hope everything goes according to plan.
      I hope everything goes the way I planned it.
      I hope I achieve my goals.
      I am hopeful that I will achieve my goals.


    Also:
    • I am going to study and work hard so I can achieve my goals.


    I wouldn't use envisage. It isn't used much, and I wouldn't recommend using it in ordinary conversation.

    :)

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    Many thanks again, teacher Ronbee! ^o^

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