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Hello, It is my short summary of a persuasive essay. What do you think about it?
Nowadays the question “How can people deal with stress?” is one of the most popular search inquiries in the USA. It is the truth, that people’s lives are penetrated with stressful events, starting from small failures and ending up with serious problems, which turn their lives upside down. It is important to say that scientists have found an outcome of this difficulty. It is having a strong sense of humor.
It is proved that people with a strong sense of humor withstand stress situations, because they try to find positive sides in everything.
Scientists affirm that a sense of humor has both short-term and long-term positive effects on our bodies and minds. As for short-time effects, a sense of humor may contribute to good work of human’s heart, lungs, and muscles and raise the spirits. As for long-time effects, it may strengthen people’s immune system and relieve pain.
Furthermore, a sense of humor should be developed, and it is more effective for people, than their inborn quality. It is important to work on humor skills and the experiment with two groups of citizens proves it.
So, a strong sense of humor is very effective tool in our stressful world.

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