Please check my first paragraph of cover letter

[dkqmail]

Below is my first paragraph of cover letter for job in the field of IT/computer science. Any suggestion or modification from you will be of great help for me.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in working for your company because of its high reputation as an excellent IT organisation with a keen drive for innovation and technical advancement. I am currently looking for a position as a network administrator or systems administrator, but I am open to a wide variety of options careers in your company.

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Your help will be appreciated greatly.

 

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in working for your company because of its [STRIKE]high[/STRIKE] strong reputation as an excellent IT organization with a keen drive for innovation and technical advancement. I am currently looking for a position as a network administrator or systems administrator, but I would also be interested in other suitable positions that may be available [STRIKE]am open to a wide variety of options careers[/STRIKE] in your company.

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