A cable TV

[Gaya87]

Hi..If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.

A cable TV service businessman, Suyambu Lingam lives happily with his wife and two daughters in a small town named Papanasam. When an uninvited guest enters into their family to cause heavy havoc, they stand together and send him to a place where he can never comeback. But the irony is that they actually messed up with the son of a powerful and sharp IG Geetha Prabhakar who does her best to bring the truth out from them. Does she succeed to investigate the case?

 

[teechar]

A cable TV service businessman

Do you mean "The owner of a cable TV service business?"

When an uninvited guest enters into their family to cause heavy havoc,

Please clarify the underlined text.

who does her best to bring the truth out from them.

Please clarify the underlined text.

 

[Gaya87]

Do you mean "The owner of a cable TV service business?"

No, Teechar. Suyambu Lingam working as a local cable TV operator.
I think I should come out as, Suyambu Lingam is a local cable TV operator living happily with his wife and two daughters in a small town named Papanasam. Much better?

When an uninvited guest enters into their family to cause heavy havoc, Please clarify the underlined text.

His elder daughter Selvi goes for a nature club where they take them to a camp where Varun, the spoiled son of IG (Inspector General) Geetha Prabhakar records a video of Selvi changing her clothes. When he threatens her with the video, she ends up killing him.

who does her best to bring the truth out from them. IG Geetha Prabhakar- (IG =Police Inspector General)

Revised as below after your feedback:

Suyambu Lingam is a local cable TV operator living happily with his wife and two daughters in a small town named Papanasam. When an uninvited guest, Varun, enters into their family to cause heavy havoc, they stand together and send him to a place where he can never comeback. But the irony is that they actually messed up with the son of an inspector general of police, Geetha Prabhakar who does her best to bring the truth out from them. Does she succeed to investigate the case?

 

[teechar]

Revised as below after your feedback:

Suyambu Lingam is a local cable TV operator living happily with his wife and two daughters in the small town of [STRIKE]named[/STRIKE] Papanasam. When an uninvited guest, Varun, enters [STRIKE]into[/STRIKE] their [STRIKE]family[/STRIKE] lives and starts to cause [STRIKE]heavy[/STRIKE] serious havoc, they stand together and send him to his demise. [STRIKE]a place where he can never comeback.[/STRIKE] But the irony is that they actually messed up with the son of [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] a police inspector general, [STRIKE]of police,[/STRIKE] Geetha Prabhakar who does her [STRIKE]best[/STRIKE] utmost to [STRIKE]bring[/STRIKE] squeeze the truth out [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] of them. Does she succeed [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] in her investigation? [STRIKE]the case?[/STRIKE]

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