[CV] Correction of some phrases in my CV

[sheo]

Hello guys,

I am from Germany and I am applying for an intership in the US.
I would really appreciate if you took a look to some of the phrases I used in the CV.
Thank you in advance!
Best regards!

1:

• Assistance in various industrial & consulting projects
• Literature researches about design & implementation of various technology forecasting processes
• Scanning, scouting & monitoring of technologies & markets
• Participation in the daily business operations of technology management

2:

• Project-based work on the xxxx car
• Function extension/process optimization of the new SAP-component evaluation database
• Definition of various logistical & organizational processes
• Creating training materials on the subject of standardization of quality-/inspection characteristics in motorsport
• Measurements with manual measurement tools, bridge-type CMMs & optical coordinate measuring systems

3:

• Creation of the lecture notes & exercise documents for the lecture: Quality Management
• Conceptual design & implementation of a quality management e-learning program
• Creation of the documents of a Lean Management seminar
• Literature research on the subject „Use of Ontologies in the Fault Management“ about intelligent incident reporting
• Monitoring & support of various seminars & congresses
• Collaboration across the entire spectrum of the operational daily business

4:

• Collaborative planning, organization & execution of student contact fairs, seminars & field trips

5:

• Industrial Engineering responsibilities
• Setting, programming & operation of various machine tools

6:

• Introduction to machining & welding processes

7:

• Introduction to forming & molding processes

 

[teechar]

Hello, [STRIKE]guys,[/STRIKE]

I am from Germany, and I am applying for an internship in the US.
I would really appreciate if you took a look [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] at some of the phrases I used in the CV.
Thank you in advance!
Best regards!

1:

• Providing assistance in various industrial & consulting projects
• Conducting literature research [STRIKE]about[/STRIKE] on design & implementation of various technology forecasting processes
• Scanning and scouting for & monitoring of technologies & markets
• Participating in the daily business operations of technology management

2:

• Performing project-based work on the xxxx car
• Implementing function extension/process optimization of the new SAP-component evaluation database
• Defining various logistical & organizational processes
• Creating training materials on the [STRIKE]subject[/STRIKE] of standardization of quality/inspection characteristics in motorsport
• Conducting precise measurements with manual measurement tools, bridge-type CMMs & optical coordinate measuring systems

3:
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• Creation of the[/STRIKE]Preparing lecture notes & exercise documents on [STRIKE]for the lecture:[/STRIKE] quality management
• Conceptual design & implementation of a quality management e-learning program
• Creating [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] the documents of a Lean Management seminar
• Literature research on the subject "Use of Ontologies in the Fault Management" about intelligent incident reporting
• Monitoring & support of various seminars & congresses
• Collaboration across the entire spectrum of the operational daily business

4:

• Collaborative planning, organization & [STRIKE]execution[/STRIKE] staging of student contact fairs, seminars & field trips

5:

• Industrial Engineering responsibilities
• Setting, programming & operating [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] various machine tools

6:

• Introduction to machining & welding processes

7:

• Introduction to forming & molding processes

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