University application

[Jazzcafe]

Hi! I would love if someone could help me to improve this letter that I have to send to a foreign university! Thank you!!

Dear Sir or Madam,

This is to request more information about your Creative Music Technology with Film Studies course at _____University. I am extremely interested in this course and I am anxious to apply for it in your renowned university for admission in 2016.


I genuinely think this is the perfect course for me because it combines film studies with music studies. I have been searching a similar course in Spain but I have not found it.


The problem is that due the deadline application I can not present my certificate in music through ABRSM because there is not enough time for me to prepare and receive the certificate. I think I have the level that is required because I have been studying piano and musical language since I was six years old. Moreover this year I am going to take a Film Scoring course which perfectly covers the level required.


I would like to know if there is any possibility for me to demonstrate my level through a video or if there is any possibility for me to apply without an ABRSM certificate.


Thank you,


Yours faithfully,

 

[teechar]

Dear Sir or Madam,

This is to request more information about your Creative Music Technology with Film Studies course at _____University. I am [STRIKE]extremely[/STRIKE] highly interested in this course, and I wish to apply [STRIKE]amanxious to apply for it in your renowned university[/STRIKE] for admission starting in 2016.

I genuinely think this is the perfect course for me because it combines film studies with music studies. I have been searching for a similar course here in Spain, but I couldn't find any such suitable course.[STRIKE]have not found it.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]The problem is that[/STRIKE] However, [STRIKE]due the deadline application[/STRIKE] I can not present my ABRSM certificate in music [STRIKE]through ABRSM[/STRIKE] by the application deadline because there is not enough time for me to obtain [STRIKE]prepare and receive[/STRIKE] the certificate and make arrangements for it to be sent. I firmly believe that [STRIKE]think[/STRIKE] I have the level that is required for admission because I have been studying piano and musical notation since I was six years old. Moreover, this year I am going to take a Film Scoring course which perfectly covers the admissions levelrequired.

I would like to know if there is any possibility for me to demonstrate my level through a video or if [STRIKE]there is any possibility for me to[/STRIKE] I can apply without an ABRSM certificate.


Thank you for your kind consideration.


Yours faithfully,

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