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    Proofread this!

    Hi can anyone please proofread my roles&resonsibilities and risk management document? http://www.webpost.net/sh/Shaorin/Roll.doc . Any suggestion for these documents to make it longer would be helpful

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    Re: Proofread this!

    Who’s responsible for what?- this is OK if you weant to be informal, but the title suggests it anyway
    incharge- two words
    togehter- typo
    flowchart to tell - show/explain/'clarify
    design the slicks, liaise - designing, liasing
    – Is supose to provide - is to provide
    the ingredients if fresh- check the ingredients are fresh
    to check all the files if there are any corrupted files- check that there are no corrupted files
    pen drive- what's this? memory stick?
    caught on fire - catching

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