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    Need some advice on a few sentences, thanks teachers.

    Dear teachers,

    Please advise if the following is grammatically correct, thanks soooooo much, teachers.

    Other than teaching Music, it would be great if I could teach a few Mathematics classes, if accepted for a post at your school. Otherwise, I am still willing to just take up the post of a Music teacher.


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    Re: Need some advice on a few sentences, thanks teachers.

    Personally, I would re-arrange the clauses in the first sentence and modify one clause for stylistic reasons (the original does make sense). There are a couple of syntax errors in the second sentence and I don't think the use of proper nouns is justified.

    "If accepted for a post at your school, in addition to teaching music it would be great if I could teach a few mathematics classes. Otherwise, I am still willing just to take up the post of music teacher."


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    Re: Need some advice on a few sentences, thanks teachers.

    Thank you soooo much for your advice, teacher Edmund.

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