Correction:Originally Posted by wpqin
Here is the sentence with problems and my revision. Does the revision correct the problems that are in the original?
The phrase for its attractive is fine, but you need to answer the question "Its attractive what?" In other words, what word goes after attractive? Properties? Also, what is unclear? Is it about the way something works? It would make sense to say, for example, "It is still unclear how that works." Or, you could say, "That explanation was unclear."Meanwhile, research on cavitation bubble collapse and emission in liquids has also focused strongly on its mechanism for its attractive and still leaving in unclear.
Meanwhile, research on cavitation bubble collapse and emission in liquids has also focused strongly on their mechanisms for which are attractive and still leaving in unclear.
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