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  1. Helped Wanted
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    Sorry for wanting help again, teachers! Please advise! Thx

    Please amend if there's any mistakes in the following passage, teachers! Thanks heaps!

    So I thought if I can be a teacher someday, I will make the lessons more interesting. I will always do some activities in class. If the students are good, I will give them stickers, candies, and sweets. I will play games with them and devise a good method to make them learn their spellings and meanings easily.


    Please help, teachers! Thanks a million again! :"(

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    Re: Sorry for wanting help again, teachers! Please advise! T

    Quote Originally Posted by Helped Wanted
    So I thought if I can be a teacher someday, I will make the lessons more interesting. I will always do some activities in class. If the students are good, I will give them stickers, candies, and sweets. I will play games with them and devise a good method to make them learn their spellings and meanings easily.(
    • When I am a teacher someday, I will make the lessons more interesting. I will always do some activities in class. If the students are good, I will give them stickers, candies, and sweets. I will play games with them and devise a good method to help them learn their spellings and meanings easily.


    The original statement was in the nature of a conditional, but I think it is meant more as a predication or statement of determination.

    :)

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    Thanks for the amendment, teacher Ronbee! ^o^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Helped Wanted
    Thanks for the amendment, teacher Ronbee! ^o^
    You're welcome, and thank you for the name you gave me.

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