[Grammar] present simple

[abdongm8]

please, correct my mistake in the article about

((present simple))

My name Jone, I'm 22 years old.
I go to my work everyday at 6:30am.
I search new job, because my work now is very tired and give me little money.
I find new job, it's give me good money but the time job isn't good.
I hope I get to good agreement with the manager.

thank you,:-D

 

[emsr2d2]

Please (no comma here) correct my mistakes in [STRIKE]the article[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]about[/STRIKE] my sentences using the present simple.

[STRIKE]((present simple))[/STRIKE]

My name is Jone. I'm 22 years old.

I go to [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] work [STRIKE]everyday[/STRIKE] every day at 6:30am.

I [STRIKE]search[/STRIKE] am looking for a new job (no comma here) because my [strike]work now[/strike] current job is very [STRIKE]tired[/STRIKE] tiring and [STRIKE]give me little money.[/STRIKE] the pay is low.

I [STRIKE]find[/STRIKE] have found a new job. i[STRIKE]t's give me[/STRIKE] The pay is good [STRIKE]money[/STRIKE] but the time job isn't good. (The underlined part doesn't make sense. Do you mean you aren't happy with the number of hours you have to work?)

I hope I [STRIKE]get to good agreement[/STRIKE] will get on well with the manager.

Thank you. :-D

See above. As you can see, you made a lot of errors with tenses, articles and punctuation. I can't see how this is an exercise in using the present simple. The present simple is not appropriate for several of those sentences.

It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".