How can I rewrite this email?

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yslamac

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Few months ago, I worked as an intern in an environmental organization. I finished the job without asking for a reference letter, which was promised by my supervisor. I want to write a short email to get back the reference letter, and could you please give recommendation or amend the email directly to make the context appropriate. Many thanks!:)

Email:

I find it important to have an reference letter for my future career, could I have it by mail or whatever way that is at your convenience. Thank you.

Full name: XXX
Adress: XXXX

Thanks & Regards,
Daniel
 

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Dear ABC,

I worked for [name of organization] from [start date] to [end date] as an intern. I would truly appreciate it if you can write a letter of reference for me. I need it when applying for jobs. You can email it to me at [email address] or even post it to [land address], whichever is convenient for you.

Thank you for your kinds consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Daniel Jones
 

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Change "kinds" to "kind".
 

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Incorrect form.

May I know why it was corrected?
 

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May I know why it was [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] corrected? :-(

I corrected it because your version was wrong. You need the article before the words you used.

A few days ago, I booked a holiday.
A few hours ago, I fell down the stairs.
A few weeks ago, my sister had a baby.
A few months ago, I decided to start studying Italian.
A few years ago, I went on holiday to New Zealand.
 
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