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    Question A sentence

    “The gain in efficiency after applying our algorithm compared to Smith’s algorithm increases under increasing a number of parameters involved in the formula (2).”
    Is this sentence ok?

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    Re: A sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by nyggus
    “The gain in efficiency after applying our algorithm compared to Smith’s algorithm increases under increasing a number of parameters involved in the formula (2).”
    Is this sentence ok?
    Thanks,
    Nyggus
    No, it isn't. It is ungrammatical.

    “The gain in efficiency after applying our algorithm compared to Smith’s algorithm increases in proportion with the number of parameters involved in the formula (2).”

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    “The gain in efficiency after applying our algorithm compared to Smith’s algorithm increases after increasing a number of parameters involved in the formula (2)."

    It depends on the sense of what you were trying to say. The sense is unclear to me from your original example.

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    Re: A sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Coffa
    “The gain in efficiency after applying our algorithm compared to Smith’s algorithm increases after increasing a number of parameters involved in the formula (2)."
    It depends on the sense of what you were trying to say. The sense is unclear to me from your original example.
    Thanks, Coffa. I meant what you wrote in the second sentence: just one word and it changes everything! Thanks again.

    Nyggus

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