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    How to improve this letter?

    Hi,

    How can I improve the following letter:

    This has reference to the Door Mat stock we require for Delhi sales. At present, we have no stock of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, while the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are also not sufficient for this month sales.

    Thanks in advance.

    Regards.

    Sweetie_Sneha


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    Re: How to improve this letter?

    Quote Originally Posted by sweetie_sneha
    Hi,
    How can I improve the following letter:
    This has reference to the Door Mat stock we require for Delhi sales. At present, we have no stock of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, while the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are also not sufficient for this month sales.
    Thanks in advance.
    Regards.
    Sweetie_Sneha
    "This is with reference to the Door Mat stock we require for sales in Delhi. At present, we have no stocks of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, and our stocks of the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are insufficient for this month's sales."


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    Re: How to improve this letter?

    Thanks a lot for the help.

    Sweetie_Sneha

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