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  1. Anonymous
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    please help me

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    please can any one write this for me

    Your new laptop computer is missing. You are sure you put it under your desk at work. You think someone stole it.

    write your narrative. When finished, check your work. Make sure that you have logically ordered events, enough details to make the story real, and that you have used correct grammar.

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    Your teacher is asking you to invent a story. Your laptop computer is missing and you suspect someone of taking it. What would you do? Who do you suspect? Who would you accuse?

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  3. maram
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    thanx alot

    but can you write it to me please

    my teacher :mad: want it on friday

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    Are you in a creative writing class? In any case, it seems to me that your teacher is asking you to think up characters, dialog, and plot. There would be no point to me doing that for you. However, if you post something I will critique it.

    (Say: "My teacher wants it on Friday.")

    You have two days. Better get started.

    :)

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