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    Sentence Structure

    How about the two sentences? If they are not right, how to correct them?

    a)That the skills to make copper and bronze objects spread to Britain was through war and armed conflict.
    b)It was thought (that) that the skills to make copper and bronze objects spread to Britain was through war and armed conflict,...

    Thanks in advance.

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    Re: Sentence Structure

    You can make the second neater:
    b)It was thought that the skills to make copper and bronze objects spread to Britain through war and armed conflict


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    Re: Sentence Structure

    That the skills to make copper and bronze objects spread to Britain was due to war and armed conflict

    It was thought that the skills to make copper and bronze objects spread to Britain was due to war and armed conflict

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