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    #1

    Did I write these sentense correctly?

    1.) Non-defining clause
    Miriam Yeung, who is a famous singer in HK, is my idol.

    2.) Definite article
    I think she is the most beautiful woman.

    3.) Sub-ordinator
    We brought a lot of snack because we afraid we will feel hungry at the night.

    4.) Introductory phrase
    After we have lunch, we go to watch a movie.


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    Re: Did I write these sentense correctly?

    can anyone help pleases?

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    Re: Did I write these sentense correctly?

    2 This sounds a bit incomplete to me- maybe add 'in the world'.
    3 We brought a lot of snacks because we were afraid we would feel hungry during the night.

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