Please feel free to post your revisions here. Then I can tell you how well you are doing.Originally Posted by SunnyLiu
"I wrote another article" is, of course, perfectly grammatical, but it would be better to say "I have written another article", since you are still working on it.
Thanks for the compliment. :D
(I think you mean "Can you give me a hand?" :wink: )
That's a good start.Originally Posted by SunnyLiu
In the second sentence, say "has become" as you are not talking about just the past but you are talking about the present as much as the past. In the fourth sentence, change "suggested" to "suggest". (Present tense.) Say: "I am opposed to that view." Say: "I am firmly convinced that...." (You don't need "Personally" there.)Originally Posted by SunnyLiu
It's about your opinion. You don't need to state in the body of the work that it is your opinion.
I'll be back with more later.